jessicasteiner: (NaNoWriMo: Logic)
Here's a subject I don't see talked about a lot in books about writing - how to plan a series. There's a lot of different things I could say about this subject, but just a few little tips. The main goal behind these tips is to keep the series from getting out of hand, and succumbing to the trap many series fall into - power creep and going on too long.

1. Have some idea of how it's going to end before it begins, and shadow the ending in the beginning. You don't have to have a firm and complete idea of how it will end, but you should have a direction, some thought of how the whole thing is going to turn out. If you have some hint of that in the very beginning of the first book, the entire series will have a tidy feeling, and the ending will be more likely to feel as though it fits the series as a whole, rather than spinning off into strange directions.

2. Make some rules, and keep them. If magic can only be performed with ritual in your fantasy story, then it should always be done with ritual, and you should think long and hard before you give your character the ability to do magic without bothering with ritual. If your science fiction hyperdrive uses wormholes and instant teleportation is impossible, don't give your ship a teleportation drive in book 5 to get yourself out of a fix.

If you set firm rules and keep them, you will avoid power creep in your main character and the reader won't get frustrated with you for breaking your own rules. You won't end up in a situation where your enemies have to get more and more powerful every book to counter the cosmic power you gave your main character in book 3. Rather than breaking your rules, find creative ways around the rules and keep them. It'll hold your reader's interest better.
jessicasteiner: (I Write Therefore I Am)
I talked about this a little yesterday, but let's talk about it a bit more. Not only is it important for your story to be interesting and not predictable. It's also important that the stakes be as high as you can make them.

Don't just make the character's life in danger if you can threaten his entire family. Don't just threaten his family if you can threaten his whole world. Don't just threaten the world if you can threaten the universe.

The higher the stakes, the more you can ratchet up the tension, and the bigger the payoff when the hero saves the day.

That being said, stakes should be appropriate to your genre and the scope of your story. If your story is set entirely in a single small town, even if it is a science fiction story rather than a romance or drama, it'd be strange if the whole universe were threatened. If the story is about a serial killer threatening the town, the whole world is probably not going to be at stake in the end game. But the main character's family and/or loved ones should almost certainly come into play.

Whether the scope of your story encompasses a galaxy-spanning Empire or a single high school chess club, don't make the stakes small and easy to overcome. You want to push your characters to the limit of what they can endure, and then it'll be far more satisfying when they overcome it.
jessicasteiner: (I Write Therefore I Am)
Friday is a bad day for blogging for me, but Sundays are a good day. Somehow this balances out.

Anyway, today's tip is about the two most important questions you should ask yourself when developing a plot for a novel. Though there are probably many more that are also key, these are biggies in my opinion.

1. Does this make sense?

Sometimes when you're writing, especially if you've followed my advice and have a great outline using the organic method, you will get to a certain point in the book where the character is going to take some important action that is absolutely necessary for them to get to the outcome you need.

And there's a little voice in the back of your mind that says "But..."

Because the action, for whatever reason - maybe because of the personality of the character, maybe because of something you've established earlier in the book, maybe because there's an obviously better course of action available - doesn't make any sense.

It sucks. But you have to ask that question, and you have to answer it honestly. If the action taken doesn't make sense, then you've lost the reader, and the whole rest of the book is ruined. It's key to find a way to either make it make sense, or to find another course of action that will still get you where you want to go. Or redevelop the ending in line with the new course of action.

2. Is this the most creative and mean I can get?

No one wants to read a book that's predictable, or where the stakes aren't high. If you fear for the character's life and don't know what's going to happen next, you'll be on the edge of your seat. If the most important decision a character has to make over the course of the book is whether to have white or brown bread on their sandwich, no one will care.

Generally as I'm plotting, I look at my first impulse and throw it away. The butler did it, yes! It's logical because I've already worked out all the great reasons why he would and he had the opportunity. No wait, maybe it's not the butler, but instead everyone will think it is, and instead it's the maid, who seems to have a solid alibi, and besides she's been the love interest of the main character for three books. It'll be devastating when he realizes.

The latter is a far more interesting outcome. Not only is the situation one that'll surprise and shock the reader, but it creates real consequences to the main character. You always want to be throwing away the most obvious and logical next steps and digging deeper, trying to find something that'll create more conflict, more emotional impact, and not be the first thing everyone thinks of. Remember, if it's the first thing you think of, then it's probably the first thing everyone else will think of, too. You don't want that.
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Today's tip is about creating places for your fantasy or science fiction setting.

You can go into more or less detail depending on how much you're going to use your setting in the story. But regardless of whether your entire series is going to be set in one small town, or if a particular place is only going to be used for one scene, you should consider the following five areas:

1. Climate and geography - What is the weather like? What are the major geographical features? How do these geographical features and the weather interact and affect one another?

2. Natural resources, economics, major industries - What sort of natural resources does this place have? What sorts of industries are important in this area? What sort of resources does this area need and has to obtain from elsewhere or go without?

3. History - What important events have taken place in the history of this place? How have those histories shaped the local culture?

4. Culture, ritual, religion - What sorts of cultural or religious rituals are common here? Holidays, rites, cultural events? Are there multiple cultures/ethnicities/religions in this area or is it more monolithic? Think about rituals around food, greetings, gestures, other important interactions like first meetings and visits to friends.

5. Politics - Who are the major political figures? What external and internal political forces are at play? What kind of political system does this place follow? Is the political landscape stable, or unstable?

There are many other areas one might think of, as well. Don't just make up a city that's the same as a place you've been before and give it a new name. Don't just assume things like cultural rituals or political system, like the ones you're used to. Your new places will have more spice and realism if you think outside the box and come up with things that are new and different.
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I talked about outlines in yesterday's post, but I wanted to talk about it some more. In the last post, I mentioned having a multi-page plot synopsis before I break it out into actual scene summaries. Today I'll explain how to get to the plot synopsis stage.

1. Write a sentence. I always start with one sentence, the overall idea. I try to include a basic description of the main character, like "A journalist" or "A graphics designer". You also want to include the main conflict. The sentence should be about 30 words or less.

2. Expand it into three major turning points. Every story has one big turning point that launches the character into the story, and a few subsequent disasters, each of which push the story forward. You may want to google the "Three Act Structure" if you want more information about this. I write one short sentence to outline each of these turning points, creating a paragraph.

3. Expand the turning points into paragraphs. Take each of the sentences in your paragraph, and expand it out into a paragraph of its own, adding more detail and surrounding events. You should have between half a page and a full page of summary by this point.

4. Expand each paragraph into a full page. Once again, add in detail and further events, developing connected sub-plots and identifying the key details that have to be included in the story.

By the time you've done this, you have 3-4 pages of synopsis, and have outlined the entire story in some detail, though not down to the actual scene point.

Many people try starting with the first scene and just trying to write an outline chronologically, and then give up in disgust because it's confusing and fiddly. If you are one of those people - or even if you aren't, try this method. You may be surprised by how much easier it is to expand out a story and create an outline when you use this organic method rather than a linear one.
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There are as many ways of planning a novel as there are authors (possibly as many ways as there are novels) but I wanted to share my general process for outlining with you today.

This outlining process is something I do after I've already done quite a bit of planning. I have a strong idea of the main characters and the general plotline before I start doing this. When I work out the plotline, I do it in paragraphs, with the main events (the turning points in the 3-act structure if you follow that method) acting as anchor points in the plotline document. What I have is a multi-page document setting out a summary of the most important points in the story in chronological order.

So with that in mind, the next thing I do is organize the plotline into scenes. I just write a few sentences for each scene, and I usually do this in an excel spreadsheet or something so it's easy to reorganize them into a different order.

I try to make sure I hit all the anchor points approximately equi-distant from one another.

I will often also specify POV in a different column in the table, especially if it's a story with multiple points of view.

When I begin writing, I have a road-map of a paragraph or so, letting me know the main points I need to hit in each scene. Often the paragraph will actually wind up expanding out into more than one actual scene, especially when you factor in cliffhangers that will split a scene into two pieces with a chapter break or other scene in another location in between. However, the outline keeps me from going too far afield or forgetting to establish something that's necessary in a later scene.

How do you do your outlines? Or do you just fly by the seat of your pants?
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This is something I picked up in a book about writing techniques which I think was written by Orson Scott Card. It took me a while to get the hang of it, but I'm going to give it a shot to explain it to you all.

A scene is a bit in the story where something happens. Usually the defining aspect of a scene is that something changes. The character may learn something new, or lose something, or gain something. Scenes are extremely important because they are the points of change that move the plot forward.

When you've just had a big 'omg' moment in a scene, it's useful to then move on to a sequence. This is a decompression point for the character. They are absorbing the big change that just happened, and figuring out what to do next. Sequences are also extremely important because they provide an opportunity for the reader to also take a breath and absorb the import of what just happened, and to whet their appetite. The character decides that they're going to take X course of action because of Y revelation, and the reader wants to know how that'll turn out. Also, a sequence gives the reader a chance to understand why the next scene is taking place - because they saw how it was decided, how the character moved from this big shock to taking action, which will then lead to another big incident.

A story is basically just a long string of scenes and sequences all in a line.

I think the part that really tripped me up at first was that I thought a sequence had to have the same weight as a scene. So if a scene takes a chapter to complete, then a sequence would be the next chapter, but that's not necessarily the case. You might have a scene with a very short sequence which basically just transitions into the next scene. Some sequences may be huge defining character moments that do bear a lot of weight, but not all need to go on for pages and pages.

But they are something that people often miss, or don't recognize. They do them without realizing they're doing them. When you're doing something by instinct, you may not be able to work out what you're doing wrong when things go awry.

Take a look at the next book you read and try to see if you can identify the scenes and sequences. It might help.
jessicasteiner: (NaNoWriMo: Logic)
I ran out of time yesterday because I was still entertaining guests, and I wanted to give this post the attention it was due. The reason why, is because I've been eagerly waiting for the chance to write about this for a long time.

Creating a language for your novel is almost essential, if you're writing about any kind of made-up foreign culture. This applies equally to aliens as to invented cultures on Earth. It adds a sense of realism and believability when the words you use in your novel sound like they weren't just made up randomly, but follow consistent rules - even if you're the only one who knows what those rules are. Even if all you're going to do is name your characters, there is a process that'll help to create that realistic feeling, as if they come from a real language that actually exists.

Now, I don't mean that I'm going to be publishing a full Austejan dictionary to go with Dale Shepard and the Bug Aliens from Outer Space. I haven't made up enough vocabulary, and I have only a very shaky grasp of Austejan grammar. But I have done the steps I'm about to impart to you.

1. Create an alphabet or set of phenoms. Every language has its own set of sounds. Try listening to people speaking different languages - or go ahead and try to learn one - if you don't know what I mean. Generally the first thing I do, is go through the alphabet and eliminate a couple of letters (it doesn't have to be a lot!). Maybe there's no L or H sound in your language, so just cross those right off.

2. Come up with some new sounds. Now that you've eliminated a couple of sounds, try to come up with some combo-letter sounds that are going to be used in the language. Try making up some that don't exist in English! Think about whether sh, th, ch sounds are in there and make up some of your own as well. Maybe do some letter substitutions - for example, K doesn't exist, but instead they will use Ch. Think about how different English would be if you made those changes.

Just keep in mind that if you try to make up a language with only 10 letters you're going to be very constrained. Also if every sound is a combo-letter or sound that has no equivalent in English, no one will be able to pronounce your character's names. A few small changes go a long way!

3. Come up with some rules. These can be pretty arbitrary, but you should apply them strictly. If you decide that all female names end in T, then don't give any males a name ending in T (without a good reason). The consistency of a few simple rules helps the whole thing hang together and even if the rules are subtle enough that no one actually picks up on them, they'll subconsciously feel more realistic than if every name is alphabet soup.

For example, in Mortis Unbound I had clear rules for naming, such that all males ended in a certain set of syllable types, and females had a different rule. I also doubled the letter "I", like in Liiran. I went further and came up with suffixes they used for place names, like -ora for capital cities. Note Laxamora and Talgarora are the main cities named, and they comply with this rule. Laxam is the name of the Empire, and its capital is Laxamora. I came up with a whole list of words for rivers, oceans, and other geographical features, which were occasionally used as necessary in the book.

You can go further than this, make up entire grammatical structures, come up with vocabulary and just keep going as far as you want. A great resource if you want more is Holly Lisle's Create a Language Clinic. I learned a great deal from this and applied it for Mortis as well as the rules for names and places in Dale.
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I'm catching up again! I spent the entire day yesterday in the car so there was no opportunity to do my blog post. So expect to see two posts from me today if I get a chance to do them both.

But on to the carnage.

Most people who've studied creative writing in any sense have probably heard the advice "Kill your Darlings". I first heard it when I was about 17, taking a creative writing course offered through my high school.

Though it seems like a fairly simple piece of advice, it took me a long time to really understand what it means. It means that just because a piece of writing is brilliant, that doesn't mean that you shouldn't cut it if cutting it is the right thing to do. You might weep at your prose, or fall utterly in love with a character, but you might still have to remove it from your novel.

If you ever find yourself editing and think "Oh man, this doesn't fit/I need to cut this scene/This character isn't necessary to the plot but I want to keep it anyway because it's just so great", then cut it anyway.

But save it. You may be able to use it later. That character you adore can be the main character in your next book. That prose you wrote that just killed your heart, maybe you can work it into something else. Or maybe not. But whatever doesn't fit in your current work has to go.
jessicasteiner: (I Write Therefore I Am)
Today's tip is about Point of View.

There are lots of different POVs. The main ones that people use are First Person, Third Person Limited, and Omniscient.

A lot of urban fantasy uses first person POV. Harry Potter is written in third person omniscient. The majority of fiction is written in third person limited. If you don't what understand the different types are, go here, because I'm not going to explain it further in this particular article.

Third person limited is by far the easiest to write. The reason why is that you have the most freedom. You can write one scene from the point of view of the best character to tell it, and the next scene can be from another character's point of view entirely, while the other character isn't present at all.

Omniscient, on the other hand, is far more difficult. You have to be careful not to confuse the reader when you shift from head to head. Because readers are used to limited, you have to be very smooth when you're shifting within the same scene. It took me three reads to realize that J.K. Rowling wasn't staying in one particular character's head throughout a scene, though I thought at first she was writing in third person limited.

First person is pretty easy to write, but has its own limitations. You can't really have multiple characters in a single book all refer to themselves as "I", so if you're going to write first person, you have to set up the book basically so everything important happens in the presence of the main character.

If you write Homestuck fanfiction or are Andrew Hussie, then you can use Second Person. Otherwise, don't do this.

And the tip?

Don't Forget Whose Head You're In.

Whether you're writing in third person limited or in first person, you want to keep in mind the character's unique voice. Remember D for Dialogue? The character's inner world influences the way they see the world, just as it influences their word choice and sentence structure.

You should be mindful of your character's biases, their world view, what they think of as important and what they don't. All of this should come through in adjective choices as you describe the world around them, because the reader is seeing it through their eyes.
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One thing that you as a writer are likely never short on, are ideas.

Now, you may not be aware of this, but with the development of a few little habits, you'll soon find that you're overflowing with ideas, many of which can easily be turned into the basis for your next plot, or character, or setting.

1. Look around, then think "What If". Whenever I'm out and about, looking at people, looking at the world, I think to myself "What If". I might see a man rummaging through a briefcase, and imagine what it is that he's looking for. Maybe it's the detonator for a bomb! One of the ideas that formed the basis of OtherWhere was being surprised by someone talking on a bluetooth headset, thinking that he was talking to me. I thought "What if phones were even more unobtrusive, and he was seeing a hologram of the person that no one else could see?". Notice the world around you, and question it.

2. Expose yourself to new ideas. I listen to two weekly science and technology podcasts. One of them is the CBC broadcast Quirks and Quarks and the other is The Future and You. Listening to those podcasts doesn't make me an expert on any given scientific or technological advance, but it affords a wealth of ideas. Nearly every episode gives me a thought for a new little tidbit I could include in a science fiction - or even fantasy - story. I'm constantly coming up with ideas as I listen to them. I can always do more research on the subject later to flesh it out if I decide to use it. One of the types of aliens in Dale and the Bug Aliens from Outer Space was inspired by a Quirks and Quarks episode in which they talked about a caste of termite that attacks enemies and explodes to take them out. Reality is stranger than you can possibly imagine.

3. Keep all your ideas. Most of the ideas you get won't be fully-fleshed story plots complete with characters and plotline, ready to go. They will be single sentences, little snippets, just a passing thought that might one day form the germ of something wonderful, or might be totally useless. They will only truly be useless if you forget about them, so write them down! I have heard that some people write all their little tidbits on notecards and keep them in a box. I have a file in which I write them all, in One Note. Each idea is on a separate little tab and sometimes I realize I have related ideas and combine them under one umbrella. It doesn't really matter how you organize them, so long as you do try to keep them all in a place where you can periodically take them out and sort through them.

4. Mix and Match. The best novel ideas involve taking two unrelated and cool ideas, and combining them. Often the two ideas on their own have been done to death, but if you put one with the other in a new way, something absolutely unique will come out of it. Periodically take out your cards or sort through your idea file and reorganize it. Try out how two ideas might work together, or even three. Flesh out some if looking at an idea sparks a new idea.

Any time you want to start a new story, your idea bank will be there. But if you don't keep the seed ideas and let them germinate, cross-pollinate them, and tend to them, they'll never grow.
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I wouldn't try to say that I'm an expert on heightening tension. I know I still have a lot to learn about this topic, but my readers have told me that when they reached a certain point in Mortis Unbound, they couldn't put it down. I hope that means I know something about this.

There's a tonne that could be said about tension.

Obviously you want to start at a certain level and tighten the screws as you go, never quite letting go of that anticipation of what might be coming around the next corner. This will draw your reader on through the story without letting them put it down and forget about it.

On the other hand, you want to give your reader a slight break from time to time. You don't want the tension to remain at maximum the whole time. If you try to do that, it'll lose its effectiveness.

But practically, how do you do this? There are lots of ways, but here's one specific tip.

End the scene at the point of change

This is often known as a cliffhanger, but it doesn't have to be a cliffhanger. The character doesn't have to be literally hanging from their nails, though certainly that's one way of doing it. It doesn't have to be opening a door and not telling the reader what's on the other side. You could reveal what it is - and then move on before the character has a chance to decide what to do about it.

The anticipation of wanting to know what comes next is what will keep your reader turning the pages. Maybe it's finding out whether Johnny will keep the bag of money he just found in his locker, or turn it in to the proper authorities. Or maybe Martha just found a strange green vial of liquid and was dared to drink it by her best friend. Or maybe she just drank it, and...what comes next?

If you wrap up each scene with a nice neat bow, if each chapter ends with a clear decision and then the character heads off to sleep with a clear mind and a clear conscience, each time that happens the reader has the opportunity to put it down and go to sleep. And maybe they won't pick it up again.

Don't give them that chance.
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Writer's block is something that I've written about before, but no list of writing tips is complete without addressing it.

Personally, I wouldn't go so far as to say that writer's block doesn't exist. But I do think that it is not a mystical, uncontrollable force. It can be overcome. It can be beaten.

There are two main reasons why writer's block happens, at least in my experience.

1. When something has gone awry in the story.

2. Negative self-talk - aka, the Inner Editor has struck.

If the problem is the first, then it's caused by your subconscious. You know that something is going off, that perhaps there's a big plot hole that you've created, or you know on some level that you're painting yourself into the corner.

I've been affected by this many times. Sometimes it takes me a day to get through the problem, sometimes longer. The main way to avoid it is to recognize it when it's happening, and then to go back through the most recent developments in a draft, to see where things are going wrong. I usually have to back up a few steps and move things in a different direction.

On the other hand, if the Inner Editor has convinced you that writing is far too difficult to move on with and it's best to just catch up on Game of Thrones, then it's you're stuck in a far more difficult situation. It's not writer's block - it's negative self-talk. The only way to beat it is with positive reinforcement.

Write a little, even if it's hard. Tell yourself that writing is fun, that it doesn't matter even if the writing is bad - that you can always fix it later. Tell yourself whatever it takes, but write something. Even if it seems terrible, it's better than nothing.

The best way to beat writer's block, is to write.
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I won't say I'm an expert on this by any means, but if you want to be a writer, there are going to be times when you have to do some research. Whether you're writing historical fantasy novels where you have to delve deeply into some real-life historical time period, or writing science fiction set in some far-flung galaxy, there will be moments when you run up against some factual tidbit that you don't know.

Do you guess and bullshit your way through it, or do in-depth research? Usually the best option is somewhere in the middle, depending on what it is. Sometimes the only way around is in-depth research - if it's something key to your story, you don't want to get it wrong. If it's a minor detail, you might not want to spend hours sussing it out, but you also don't want to mess it up.

Because I guarantee you, someone will know.

Here are a couple of tips for finding those niggling facts:

1. Google and Wikipedia. Not the best option for the key facts, but it's generally my go-to start point. Resources you come up with on the internet can be wrong, but that doesn't mean they always are. If you're looking for a little easy fact, like when the zipper was invented or what the name of a particular star is, you can probably get the answer quickly and easily using the internet. For bigger things, you can get a general overview of your topic and learn how to find more detailed resources by starting with a quick search.

2. The Library. You might be amazed, but there are actually still libraries out there and there are people in those libraries who can help you to find the information you need, quickly, cheaply, and easily. If you have a university near you, take advantage of it. But even if you don't, there are interlibrary loans and other options to get you the books you need for those most important facts. Through the university you may also be able to get into contact with a real live expert on the subject, as well.

3. Bookstores. If all else fails, you can purchase textbooks on your subject online or at your local bookstore. If you are dedicating many years of your life to some series of novels set in a particular time period, it might be worth it to you to invest in a small library of books on that time period, to use as quick reference about a variety of important details.

4. Read other fiction books about your topic. This is a double-edged sword. If there is an author who you feel has done his or her research and it's likely to be accurate, you can probably pick up on a lot of information just by reading their novels. But be careful! They could be bullshitters who have guessed their way through. Most movies set in the past are horribly inaccurate. It's important to do your own research as well, to be sure that what you're using is accurate. But for real-life flavour, a good novelist can help a great deal.

5. Read books written by actual people in that time period, or culture, that you want to research. If you can pull this off, do it. Of course, if you're writing a book set in the future or in the very far past, there won't be books written by a native. But when it comes to little details like grooming, social mores, etc., it can often be hard to find textbooks that give you the real flavour of what it was like to actually live in that time period or culture. It's one thing to know that zippers weren't invented yet. It's another to read a book written by someone who lived without zippers, and pick up on the tiny ways in which that affected their lives, by living that life through their own eyes.
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I'll be doing two posts today to catch up! Yesterday I ended up working a 14 hour day and not getting home until after 8, then crashing, so I think I get a pass......

Today's tip is about editing, which is a huge topic! I couldn't possibly teach a whole course on editing in one post (which is why I'm doing a series on it, which will resume in May), but I do have a tip to share today.

Don't sweat the small stuff until you've fixed the big things!

One editing course I took likened this to doing plastic surgery on a patient while they're still gushing blood from the harpoon in their chest. When you edit, start by looking at the broad issues, like:

  • Does your plot work?

  • Do you have enough characters? Too many? Do they have a character arc that is resolved? Do all of your characters have a unique and important purpose in the story that can't be fulfilled by anyone else?

  • Have you fulfilled all of the promises you made at the beginning? Have you resolved all your sub plots?

  • Does your story build in tension slowly to a climax towards the end or is the pacing disjointed?

There are many other Big Things that you should look at, and you can probably easily add to this list. When you're starting to edit a novel, don't get bogged down in fixing sentence structure if the entire scene needs to be chucked out. You'll waste a lot of time, and probably not even notice the big overall problems if you're focused on the minutia. It's missing the forest for the trees.

My experience is that editing involves multiple passes through the novel, looking at broader issues first and then working my way down to the nitty gritty. It might seem like a lot of work, but don't worry about that! The novel will be far, far better by the time you're finished, and isn't that worth it?

Your first draft is nothing more than the scaffolding on which you hang the magic. Don't let the fact that it takes some work for the magic to happen seduce you into trying to publish scaffolding.

...I'm not sure if that metaphor worked, but there you go.
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There's a lot of wisdom out there about writing dialogue. Most of it involves reading things out loud to see if it comes naturally. I can't really offer that as a tip, since to be quite honest I've never done it.

But I do have three tips about writing dialogue for you today.

1. Characters don't talk like real people talk. If you really listen to how real people talk, you'll discover that we speak horribly. Real person dialogue is filled with run-on sentences, poor grammar, and sentence fragments. There is a certain level of good grammar and sentence structure that's expected in all writing, even in dialogue.

2. But don't be stilted! Though characters don't talk like real people, characters also don't have perfect grammar and sentence structure. Unless they're androids, in which case you shouldn't use contractions.

3. Make it different. It's important that all your characters have their own voice, at least to some extent. Some people give each character a particular vocal quirk, but you don't want to go too far with this. If every character has one, it becomes really obvious that you're using it as a device to make your characters sound different.

But it is key to try to make sure that each character sounds unique, and that they don't all sound like you. Think about the character's level of education, their personality, and other traits about them. A poorly educated character won't have the same vocabulary you likely do. A very precise and detail-oriented character will speak differently, choose different words, than a character who's under the influence of a drug.

You can do a lot with word choice, differences in sentence structure, slang, and other small changes, so long as you use them consistently and in accordance with the other things you know about that character.
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Today I want to write about creating characters. There are lots of ways to do it! I've experimented with probably half a dozen different methods, and generally speaking I think that different methods work for different people. You just have to find the one that works for you, and don't feel as though you have to use a method that isn't working just because other people say it's the Way To Do It.

For example, one method I see touted a lot is to fill out long questionnaires that ask a lot of fiddly details about the character. I've seen many of them passed around and have tried a few individual questionnaires. For a while I slavishly filled out a questionnaire that was probably 15 pages in length by the time I'd filled out the nicknames and listed all the siblings and talked about the home town etc. etc. It would take me weeks to fill out the damn thing for each character, and I usually wanted to take an icepick to the brain for most of the process.

And then I generally forgot all about it while I was writing. Suddenly the character needed a sibling I hadn't mentioned, or came from a totally different part of the world, or his hair was brown instead of red. If I tried to stick to the original plan, the character became flat and forced.

For many people, this method works great, I'm sure. It probably gets them thinking about the weird little quirks and details and helped them flesh out their character so they weren't two-dimensional. For me, it never did that. My characters tend to tell me about themselves as they write them, and to have a whole lot of details pre-planned hems me in.

What I do instead is have the questionnaire available, and fill it in as the details come to me while I'm writing - not to hem me in, but so I don't forget about it later.

However, there are five things that you should know about your character - particularly main and important side characters - before you begin. They are absolutely key, and they've got nothing to do with hair colour. This is the questionnaire I do fill out for each character:

1. What is the character's goal?
2. What is the obstacle that will stop them from achieving their goal?
3. What is the worst thing that could happen to the character?
4. What is the best thing that could happen to the character?
5. How is the character going to change by the end of the story?
jessicasteiner: (I Write Therefore I Am)
Today's writing tip is about being consistent in what you do.

One of the biggest things I see in people who are struggling with their writing is that they don't work on it consistently. They might write a bit when they feel that inspiration hit, but then three weeks go by and they still 'mean' to get back to it any time.

Say you wrote 2000 words on that big day when inspiration struck, but that was the only day in a month that you wrote. You'd have 2000 words for the month. But say you only wrote 100 words a day, but wrote them every day. By the end of a month, you'd have 3000 words. By the end of a year, you'd have 36,500 words. Not NaNoWriMo, but better than a lot of people manage.

And most days, you'd write more than 100 words.

So try to write something every day, and to do it consistently. You'll be amazed by how much you'll accomplish.
jessicasteiner: (Bad Writing Day)
I'm doing the Blogging from A-Z Challenge and I've decided that to achieve this goal of blogging every day (except Sundays) for a month, I will do a bit of a theme - short and sweet writing tips.

Today's writing tip is extremely relevant to my life this past weekend.

When submitting completed work for publication, it's extremely important to read the submission instructions carefully! A small mistake (such as missing a deadline or failing to include a required piece of information) can instantly disqualify you from consideration.

I think the simplest reason for this is simply that people who read through submissions are extremely busy and get hundreds, sometimes thousands of submissions for any given publication spot. They are looking for easy ways to cull down the list of things they have to read. Failing to include something they request makes it easy to drop yours off the list. They're looking for the cream that rises to the top, not offering a lot of hand holding.

So don't ever do what I just did! When someone says that the deadline for submissions to their anthology is March 30, 2013 don't write down March 31, 2013 and wait for the last day to submit, only to realize that you missed it.

Don't be me, internet. Don't be me.

In related news, I have a homeless short story I'm going to be submitting around. Oh well.
jessicasteiner: (Save the World)
Yesterday I had an internet outage at my house that lasted the entire evening (and in fact, it's still not fixed, and the tech is due on Monday morning. Sob).

I wrote a great deal more than usual, and I finished the first draft of Dale.

...There may be a connection here.

I've already got a lot of things that I want to change and improve, including adding an entire sub plot. Unfortunately I have no idea what it'll be about. However, I'm overall very pleased with how it turned out in a general sense. I'm letting it sit at least until May, I expect, when I'll pull it out again for the first polish.

In the meantime, I'm editing OtherWhere. I've also started writing a short story which I plan to submit to an anthology.

And that's the State of Jessica Steiner's Writing for tonight. Good night!


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